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Sequence-To the Morrow

Highs
and lows,
come & go,
the tide ebbs ,then
flows
to
cover
yesterday's
footprints on the
shore-
now
no more,
the shadows
of forgotten
flaws,
gone,
self-doubt
left to die-
hope unleashed,flies
high

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/1/2023 8:55:00 AM

Lovely write full of imagery and feeling

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/8/2020 7:47:00 AM

I am drawn to the ocean.

John Michaels

Date: 4/8/2017 9:32:00 AM

I really enjoyed this piece. Very clever. Regards, John.

Brian Strand
Date: 4/8/2017 11:16:00 AM

Thank you John for your kind words

Kathleen Kroll

Date: 5/31/2016 7:30:00 PM

I've enjoyed several of your poems but this is by far my favorite. You've captured the flow of the tide and the emotions it can unleash! Wonderfully written. Kathy

Brian Strand
Date: 6/1/2016 6:49:00 AM

Thank you for your encouraging words rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 10/7/2009 1:32:00 AM

A MASTERPIECE!. TO MY FAVORITES LIST. Lainie

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/6/2009 4:57:00 PM

Good gosh, Brian...I have just started reading your stuff...2537 and counting...think I'm gonna' learn a lot from you!! - Tim

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 10/5/2009 1:36:00 PM

This is a brilliant piece of poetry. Congratulations: Déirdre

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/5/2009 12:53:00 PM

As Robin has said, there is wisdom in this metaphor...a lovely sequence poem! Enjoyed this one. Oh yes...in today's mail I received your book, "Retrospectives", it finally arrived!! Already, I have sat and began enjoying each entry, one by one. There is much to digest, learn from, and I thank you so much for sharing these writings with us. So much to learn! Thank you!! ~ Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/5/2009 12:11:00 PM

This is such a wonderful, flowing sequence, Brian! Lovely imagery and your wise words blend together so beautifully. Thank you for your thoughtful comments! Love, Robin

P Sheart

Date: 10/5/2009 8:37:00 AM

Brian I'm going to have to put this into my favorites. It's one meaningful poem. Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patty