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Sequence-January

Just beneath winter's coat, ivy makes a home... the blackbird forages yet no song we hear... day inches evening towards teatime light... as sunshine melts away the hibernal night

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Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/5/2020 7:19:00 AM

Beautiful imagery..

Brian Strand
Date: 1/5/2020 8:47:00 AM

Cheers,thanks Jenish

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/14/2009 11:55:00 PM

Excellent one, I like they way it flows...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/14/2009 11:39:00 AM

Loved this one...'hibernal night" is terrific. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/14/2009 8:04:00 AM

I love this poem....into my favs.!! One of the loveliest poems I've read with such hopeful signs of season's changing. ~ Sincerely, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/14/2009 5:13:00 AM

Brian, this is outstanding. Are you accepting Lanterne sequences for your contest too? I am so inspired by this. Thank you. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/14/2009 2:59:00 AM

This is brilliant. I love how you always manage to make forms look effortless, when they are quite hard to pull off, as such - an awesome, visual piece. love, Kristin

Elaine George

Date: 1/14/2009 1:25:00 AM

A lanterne quartet! WOW!!!! I am impressed. Lainie

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/14/2009 1:12:00 AM

Excellently described Sir Brian .... Love the phrase ; " Hibernal Night " ... Rgds from this "Hibernia Knight" .... PS I was about to present a Haiku with a similar word-flow , But I can't compete with this description .....