Sequence-Gone Away

With a kiss on her lips- a face cold and bare, still, beauty in her stare- but she was not there

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Date: 7/21/2009 6:22:00 AM

The master of Lanterne has spoken. Brian exceptional as usual.Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Date: 7/20/2009 7:29:00 PM

Lovliness breathes beauty in this moving piece Brian, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!

Date: 7/18/2009 8:36:00 AM

Wow Brian.. this is a beautiful piece..I love it very much..Thank you for sharing Always, Farah

Date: 7/17/2009 8:06:00 PM

A masterful vision in this write, Brian. And I love the way you end it with the last two lines. Love, Carolyn

Date: 7/17/2009 7:18:00 PM

beautiful lanterne

Date: 7/17/2009 6:06:00 PM

Gone with the wind...lovely and sad. Bg

Date: 7/17/2009 4:57:00 AM

Brian,..a touching write,...I had to take a deep breath after reading this one. God bless you . james

Date: 7/17/2009 4:11:00 AM

love the twist and the missing letter! cool!! jim

Date: 7/17/2009 3:59:00 AM

Interesting Lanterne,Brain. Sara