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sequence-GONE AWAY

With
a kiss
on her lips-
a face cold and
bare,
still,
beauty in her stare-
but she was not
there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/21/2009 6:22:00 AM
The master of Lanterne has spoken. Brian exceptional as usual.Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2009 7:29:00 PM
Lovliness breathes beauty in this moving piece Brian, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/18/2009 8:36:00 AM
Wow Brian.. this is a beautiful piece..I love it very much..Thank you for sharing Always, Farah
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Date: 7/17/2009 8:06:00 PM
A masterful vision in this write, Brian. And I love the way you end it with the last two lines. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2009 7:18:00 PM
beautiful lanterne
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Date: 7/17/2009 6:06:00 PM
Gone with the wind...lovely and sad. Bg
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Date: 7/17/2009 4:57:00 AM
Brian,..a touching write,...I had to take a deep breath after reading this one. God bless you . james
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Date: 7/17/2009 4:11:00 AM
love the twist and the missing letter! cool!! jim
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:59:00 AM
Interesting Lanterne,Brain. Sara
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