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Sequence-Candlemas

Aconites gazing into the sun 'neath catkins dangling,finely spun Awakened mammals desert their holes rummaging midst the hazel boles Long twilight days in winter's shade tomorrow..brings snowdrops in the glade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/28/2009 7:29:00 PM
This is beautful, Brian. I love the form. I looked it up and your example is lovely too. Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Love, Robin
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Date: 1/28/2009 9:29:00 AM
This is so beautiful..I think one of the best I've read in a while. wonderful..the last bit it lovely. BG
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Date: 1/28/2009 8:08:00 AM
Very beautiful in imagery and more. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/28/2009 7:56:00 AM
This sings in it's beauty. Lovely poem, lovely visuals. ~ Sincerely, Carrie
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Date: 1/28/2009 6:37:00 AM
My mind is lost in the beauty of this Brian. Love the last verse...well done. Thanks for the welcome comments brother.
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:15:00 AM
Love the couplet rhyme scheme and the imagery created in this piece. Excellent writing. MIchael
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Date: 1/28/2009 3:45:00 AM
Nice Poem, I've Never Heard Of A Crystalline. IS It Like A Couplet? Tyler
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