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Sequence-Biding Time

One after another, change .their plaintive call Spring, Summer, into Fall, hark,hear Winter's cry- seeds asleep, never die, quiet dormant lie- in command, and on demand as sunlight comes by

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/18/2009 8:34:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful Brian. Thanks for always being so thoughtful to me. Happy Christmas to you and yours and all the best in the new year. hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 12/15/2009 4:12:00 PM
Wow, this is incredible, Brian. I have read it over and over. Simply beautiful! Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry ~Juliane
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:48:00 AM
One to read and re-read to take in all the meanings, Brain...a sign of a great piece of work - Tim
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:42:00 AM
I am still contemplating this ... there is a sort of Wordsworthian complexity to its simplicity ... beauty, beauty, beauty!
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Date: 12/15/2009 5:32:00 AM
God's miracluous gift to man. Beautifully said. Sara
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Date: 12/15/2009 3:41:00 AM
Exception lanterne, Brian. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:30:00 AM
Fascinating as always Brian, nice work...Raul
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Date: 12/14/2009 7:23:00 PM
Very nice Brian...love this form...Marty
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:39:00 PM
Makes me smile with this one, Brian!! Thanks for your comment on the In The Now poem featured this week ... I was mad about it being featured as I need to edit it and my ego says I've written much better ... smile ... oh well, guess I'm still a brat ...
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Date: 12/14/2009 10:56:00 AM
And such a miracle is that tiny seed....we need to stop and realize these small gifts come from God...and what a blessing in the way such beauty comes! Lovely write, dear Brian! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:57:00 AM
Brian - excellent vision in this seasonal poem - Wonderful poetry my friend - I'll be writing a Naughty Boy Poem for your contest today - i reckon I once fit that bill quite well -God Bless you Brian, mj
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