September Slip

I married one September morn:
a day I surely won't forget
(each  time I think about my wife,
I break into a clammy sweat...)

LOL, loosely based on reality - written 19th September for Andrea's contest

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Date: 10/12/2022 7:04:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/28/2022 10:22:00 AM
Hey Jack! This is whimsy wrapped up in laughter! Definitely fun! Congratulations on your win! Thanks for the chuckle.
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Date: 9/25/2022 3:45:00 PM
Ha Jack, You're too funny. You'd better eat this poem before your wife finds it! :) Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 9/25/2022 2:34:00 AM
I too would have placed you high on the winners' list, Jack!! After such a slip one tends to tread more carefully. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/24/2022 3:06:00 PM
Congratulatiions, Jack: on your top placement. very humorous….SuZ
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Date: 9/24/2022 4:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win with with this humorous write
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Date: 9/24/2022 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations Jack! Clever "September Slip"....Lol! :)Paulette
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Date: 9/24/2022 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this humorous poem
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Date: 9/23/2022 8:56:00 PM
Jack, isn't that every married man's nightmare: waking up the day after the forgotten anniversary and realizing it Is. Too. Late. Congrats on the #1 spot with this fun write ~ John
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Date: 9/23/2022 7:56:00 PM
Dear Jack, your fun wonderful humor shines.. Thanks for the lol this evening! Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/23/2022 7:43:00 PM
Absolutely hilarious, Jack. LOVE This. BIG congrats in my contest.
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Date: 9/20/2022 10:44:00 PM
So much heartfelt reasoning in there, Jack. Stay well my friend. Harry
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Date: 9/19/2022 12:28:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. A date you probably would not want to remember anymore. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
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