September Rose

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September waltzes in high on its tiptoes graceful under the midnight moon skyline honored to present its most fragrant rose September waltzes in high on its tiptoes with an array of sweet columbine how their perfumes sweetly tickle my nose Under starlight my love only grows always the fond memory of sweet Adeline and her heart without ribbons and bows Forever inclined to poetry and prose connecting the dots to my lifeline long for love while avoiding stray arrows September waltzes in high on its tiptoes gingerly on this path that is mine time flies as rife opportunity flows Torn between past and future I suppose when breeze and memories intertwine September waltzes in high on its tiptoes honored to present its most fragrant rose AP: 1st place 2020, 2nd place 2020 Submitted on July 9, 2020 for contest MONTH OF THE YEAR I LIKE MOST sponsored by MOHAN CHUTANI - RANKED 8TH

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/27/2020 12:39:00 AM

Wow! Septmber seems to twirl along the lines of your pen smoothly with this beautiful muse Line. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2020 2:04:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely compliment, Aditi.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/18/2020 11:19:00 AM

You and I share a love of September! I love the 'waltzing on tiptoes' line, congratulations, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2020 4:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated ~

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/18/2020 1:25:00 AM

Line, a very fine muse on September. I liked how you connected it with writing poetry which is your lifetime passion. Enjoyed the month waltzing high on its tiptoes. Thankyou for being part of my contest and congratulations on getting a fine placement. Best. Mohan

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2020 9:36:00 AM

Thanks, Mohan. I appreciated the inspiring prompt. Thank you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2020 2:33:00 AM

I am ready for September to "waltz in". Lovely tribute to one of my many favorite months, Line. Thank you for this one!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2020 8:51:00 AM

OMG Caren, we are 6 weeks away ~

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/13/2020 3:25:00 PM

Wow! A FAV for me. You never cease to amaze me with the new ways to touch my heart. Bravo Miss Line. "September waltzes in high on its tiptoes" Absolutely love it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/13/2020 8:50:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Timothy. Most appreciated ~