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September Rose

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September waltzes in high on its tiptoes
graceful under the midnight moon skyline
honored to present its most fragrant rose

September waltzes in high on its tiptoes
with an array of sweet columbine
how their perfumes sweetly tickle my nose

Under starlight my love only grows
always the fond memory of sweet Adeline
and her heart without ribbons and bows 

Forever inclined to poetry and prose
connecting the dots to my lifeline
long for love while avoiding stray arrows

September waltzes in high on its tiptoes
gingerly on this path that is mine
time flies as rife opportunity flows

Torn between past and future I suppose
when breeze and memories intertwine
September waltzes in high on its tiptoes
honored to present its most fragrant rose



AP: 1st place 2020, 2nd place 2020

Submitted on July 9, 2020 for contest MONTH OF THE YEAR I LIKE MOST sponsored by MOHAN CHUTANI  -  RANKED 8TH

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Aditi Mishra Date: 7/27/2020 12:39:00 AM Wow! Septmber seems to twirl along the lines of your pen smoothly with this beautiful muse Line. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/27/2020 2:04:00 AM Thank you for your lovely compliment, Aditi.

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/18/2020 11:19:00 AM You and I share a love of September! I love the 'waltzing on tiptoes' line, congratulations, Line! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/18/2020 4:12:00 PM Thank you so much, Michelle. Most appreciated ~

Mohan Chutani Date: 7/18/2020 1:25:00 AM Line, a very fine muse on September. I liked how you connected it with writing poetry which is your lifetime passion. Enjoyed the month waltzing high on its tiptoes. Thankyou for being part of my contest and congratulations on getting a fine placement. Best. Mohan Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/18/2020 9:36:00 AM Thanks, Mohan. I appreciated the inspiring prompt. Thank you.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/17/2020 2:33:00 AM I am ready for September to "waltz in". Lovely tribute to one of my many favorite months, Line. Thank you for this one! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/17/2020 8:51:00 AM OMG Caren, we are 6 weeks away ~

Timothy Mcguire Date: 7/13/2020 3:25:00 PM Wow! A FAV for me. You never cease to amaze me with the new ways to touch my heart. Bravo Miss Line. "September waltzes in high on its tiptoes" Absolutely love it! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/13/2020 8:50:00 PM Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Timothy. Most appreciated ~