September Emit Elegance

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Write Six Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Written 3/17/2025

White roses stand in subtle elegance, A light breeze stirs awe of tasteful fragrance. A marriage under a spreading old tree On a grassy lawn, edged with trellis-free Ambiance kiss of fallen amber leaves, A continuous aesthetic spins and weaves.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/21/2025 2:41:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/20/2025 6:55:00 AM

congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/19/2025 3:47:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Rhyme write again. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/18/2025 4:43:00 AM

Dear Eve, Your words are like a gentle sigh of beauty, a moment suspended in grace. I can see it so clearly with the white roses, the soft breeze, the quiet reverence of love unfolding beneath that old tree. There’s something timeless in the way you paint this scene, something both delicate and enduring. Loved It! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/17/2025 5:30:00 PM

Love these six beautiful lines of rhyme.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2025 10:42:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful Rhyme write. I can see it before me. Pretty... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Enjoy today with blessings...........