September

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The cold claims the day as
the sun respectfully retreats
Behind a wall of ominous clouds

Walking with heavy restless legs
A loneliness sets in I don’t recognize
It’s a heaviness falling like a cover
Tangible like the oncoming of something
Like an echo of a distant muffled cry

And everything around seems asleep
I hear an endless thundering silence
That alarming absence of joy and laughter
As if every single soul is in shock
On this first day announcing fall.



Read on air by invitation  ~  September 9, 2020  'POETIC SLICE OF LIFE'

AP:  Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on August 31, 2017 for contest EARLY SEPTEMBER STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/19/2018 6:53:00 PM
Belated Congrats on scoring a big win with Brian with this one, by the way. I've seen and commented on all your August poems I liked from 2018. Next time I will start with SEptember.
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Date: 4/19/2018 6:51:00 PM
I really like this one because I always start feeling weird around this time of year. I was born in early September, and I think my Celtic horosope is the melancholy willow tree, something like that. So i really identify with this poem, and feeling "heaviness" today. I really have to let things roll off me and stop being so senstive!
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Date: 9/2/2017 6:22:00 AM
yeah, and all the flannel shirts dancing in the closet....nice one Line
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Date: 9/2/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thanks John. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 9/2/2017 1:16:00 AM
Beautiful write, Line, I love every nuance ... blessings and congrats on your well-deserved win! This is wonderful!
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Date: 9/2/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Greg. Appreciate your comment.
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