Sepia Visions

Nestled in the arms of night's embrace
 I wait for grievous thoughts to fade
  as though they were bubbles popping
   one by one, in a fluted glass of champagne

When bold colored memories languish
 sepia visions distort my sorrows
  and the scars branded across my heart
   become blurred by the moon and stars

I'd rather not recall the depths of sorrow
 No need for crayon drawings of it all
  Time should erase the heartache I feel
   but it's moving much too slowly, I think
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Simon Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:45 PM
You have a gift in your ability to make a reader see beautiful and poignant images in your writes.
Logan Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:46 AM
I am just reading your lovely comment, Nad. It's so encouraging...thank you.
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 7:26 PM
Love that analogy of the grievous thoughts to bubbles of champagne popping... I can just picture them popping one by one by one... each one corresponding to a tear over differentiated grief. Superb, Jenna. Write on, please! Thanks, Gershon
Logan Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 6:07 AM
Your review and kind words are encouragement. Thank you, Gershon.
Leffanta Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 1:32 PM
When you go to bed, focus on what you really want to do when you wake up for the most pleasant dreams! Aloha! Rico
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Oh goodness, Rico. That could lead me to many interesting places. Thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 10:44 AM
Stunning piece Jenna. ~Maureen
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Your thoughts are gracious. Thank you. Was it Maureen?
Toney Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 10:34 AM
Jenna, your brilliant poem reminds me of the Evanescence lyric “ These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real. There's just too much that time cannot erase.” I’ve added this to my Fav Poems. Again, welcome to the Soup. Cheers! ~Mark
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:54 PM
You're so right about the lyrics you've left. I'll have to check into Fav Poems? I'm still navigating my way around. Thanks for another visit.
Gondolf Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Nicely written, Jenna, sometimes those sepia visions are hard to let go of, sometimes they haunt you for years. All the best my friend. John
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 4:52 PM
Hello again, John. Yes, they do. I am delighted by your kind words and visits. Thank you.
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