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Sepia Visions

Nestled in the arms of night's embrace I wait for grievous thoughts to fade as though they were bubbles popping one by one, in a fluted glass of champagne When bold colored memories languish sepia visions distort my sorrows and the scars branded across my heart become blurred by the moon and stars I'd rather not recall the depths of sorrow No need for crayon drawings of it all Time should erase the heartache I feel but it's moving much too slowly, I think

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Nad Simon

Date: 7/23/2020 5:45:00 PM

You have a gift in your ability to make a reader see beautiful and poignant images in your writes.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/29/2020 5:46:00 AM

I am just reading your lovely comment, Nad. It's so encouraging...thank you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2020 7:26:00 PM

Love that analogy of the grievous thoughts to bubbles of champagne popping... I can just picture them popping one by one by one... each one corresponding to a tear over differentiated grief. Superb, Jenna. Write on, please! Thanks, Gershon

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/27/2020 6:07:00 AM

Your review and kind words are encouragement. Thank you, Gershon.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/26/2020 1:32:00 PM

When you go to bed, focus on what you really want to do when you wake up for the most pleasant dreams! Aloha! Rico

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2020 4:55:00 PM

Oh goodness, Rico. That could lead me to many interesting places. Thank you.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/26/2020 10:44:00 AM

Stunning piece Jenna. ~Maureen

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2020 4:55:00 PM

Your thoughts are gracious. Thank you. Was it Maureen?

Mark Toney

Date: 6/26/2020 10:34:00 AM

Jenna, your brilliant poem reminds me of the Evanescence lyric “ These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real. There's just too much that time cannot erase.” I’ve added this to my Fav Poems. Again, welcome to the Soup. Cheers! ~Mark

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2020 4:54:00 PM

You're so right about the lyrics you've left. I'll have to check into Fav Poems? I'm still navigating my way around. Thanks for another visit.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/26/2020 9:22:00 AM

Nicely written, Jenna, sometimes those sepia visions are hard to let go of, sometimes they haunt you for years. All the best my friend. John

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2020 4:52:00 PM

Hello again, John. Yes, they do. I am delighted by your kind words and visits. Thank you.