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Sentinel, Oh, Sentinel For Sentinel Contest

Sentinel, oh, Sentinel

Sentinel, oh sentinel,
lofty by the sea;
lonely on a craggy coast,
standing tirelessly.

Watching over ships that sail
in the dark of night,
guiding them ashore with its
welcome blinking light.

Storms rise up, assailing it -
fierce and turbulent -
causing waves to pound it with
mighty discontent.

Let the tempests clamor and
crash! They cannot fell
our towering, resilient,
stalwart sentinel!

Written April 10, 2016 in 7/5 Trochee Quatrain form
For the Sentinel Quatrain Poetry Contest of Eve Roper

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 12:30 AM
Congratulations Andrea..... Linda
Dutta Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:30 PM
Congrats Andrea to win. Another excellent contribution as usual
Misra Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. A superb write!
Walker Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Love, love, love this gem of a poem. So powerfully written.
Palli Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Love this one! Great work!
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 1:11 PM
This is really good, Andrea! It reminds me a bit of my own attempt, which I forgot all about and it got neither posted nor entered!! I wrote mine in the first person sing. I see that this is a top winner, so...congratulations!! // paul
Pennell  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 1:50 AM
congrats on your big win stephen
Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:30 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
May Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Babu Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 8:58 PM
Andrea: Many Congrats on your TOP Win
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on your Second Place \win in 'the sentinel contest'. Hugs, Sandra
Hicks Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 2:18 AM
You always have wonderful flow to your poems, Andrea ... never do I stumble at the words. It's amazing to me how that lighthouse survives such an onslaught of water. I believe you captured that well ... best of luck!
Gorelick Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Hi there, enjoyed the flow of this..it really is true to the picture. BG
Delaney Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 10:55 PM
This picture really spoke to you. The meter and rythm rolled along easily. Hugs SuZ
Mohn Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 7:17 PM
so lyrical and smartly written Andrea
Parker Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 5:47 PM
well done my poetic friend, it's an easy read...good luck in the contest
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 5:27 PM
Very nice rhythm and rhyme in your sentinel poem, Andrea. I wish you all the best for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Anish Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Personally I love lighthouses. Fine verse here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Smith Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Let the tempests clamor...love the ending stanza Andrea. The poem shows so much power to go along with the picture
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..Enjoyed reading your work..I do like the lighthouses..It is a tireless friend..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
La France Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Andrea, I think your poem is wonderfully written, I admire your meter so much and I am loving this 7 ~
Austin Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Go on the coastline of Upper Michigan and you'll see a few of these towers. I think, considering the power of Lake Superior, they may find use in fierce storms. It would be interesting to find out. Love, daver
Devnath  Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Beautiful poem drawn with beautiful colors. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend, bl
Manassian Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Beautiful, dear. I loved this piece. It give one hope to withstand any storm. hugs
Manassian Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Beautiful, dear. I loved this piece. It give one hope to withstand any storm. hugs
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