Sent Packing

The trading this year has been slack
There's hardly a present to pack.
The elves have been fired
Old Rudolph's retired
And Santa's been given the sack!!


28.11.20

syllable count by ear: 88558

Make Me Laugh With Some Humor 
Any Form - New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
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Chamberlain Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Thankfully Santa made it to me this year. :-) Congratulations on your winning placement.
Kendrick Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 9:45 AM
I really like the play on the idea of sack. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Mcintosh Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 3:03 AM
So adorable. I love it. Congrats on your 1st place win. God B L E S S you always
Watt Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 2:30 AM
Really funny finish, Wendy! Congrats ~ John
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations on your win, Wendy. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve
Koplin Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Fowler Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Nice rhythm and rhyme Wendy. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Y. Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 4:42 AM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations on your win, Wendy, you gave me a welcoming tickle. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Have a great day. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year:-) Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:46 AM
Wendy, congratulations on your winning placement with your humorous limerick!
Watson Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 4:18 AM
Thanks, Tania. My husband and I are going to dress as elf and Father Christmas and recite this via zoom Christmas calls!
Walker Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Haha, Wendy! you did make me laugh! What a nice way to sue your talents.
Watson Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 4:17 AM
I appreciate your having taken the time to read and give this nice comment,David.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Hello Wendy, what would we do without Santa? I wonder. enjoy your evening my friend.
Watson Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 4:16 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting,Darlene. Happy Christmas!
Leffanta Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Clever girl! Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Rico
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