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The trading this year has been slack There's hardly a present to pack. The elves have been fired Old Rudolph's retired And Santa's been given the sack!! 28.11.20 syllable count by ear: 88558 Make Me Laugh With Some Humor Any Form - New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/1/2021 2:50:00 AM
Thankfully Santa made it to me this year. :-) Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 12/31/2020 9:45:00 AM
I really like the play on the idea of sack. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 12/28/2020 3:03:00 AM
So adorable. I love it. Congrats on your 1st place win. God B L E S S you always
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Date: 12/28/2020 2:30:00 AM
Really funny finish, Wendy! Congrats ~ John
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Date: 12/27/2020 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Wendy. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/26/2020 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/26/2020 8:15:00 AM
Nice rhythm and rhyme Wendy. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 12/25/2020 4:42:00 AM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/20/2020 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Wendy, you gave me a welcoming tickle. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/19/2020 2:59:00 PM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Have a great day. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/19/2020 3:46:00 AM
Wendy, congratulations on your winning placement with your humorous limerick!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 12/19/2020 4:18:00 AM
Thanks, Tania. My husband and I are going to dress as elf and Father Christmas and recite this via zoom Christmas calls!
Date: 11/30/2020 3:25:00 AM
Haha, Wendy! you did make me laugh! What a nice way to sue your talents.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 12/19/2020 4:17:00 AM
I appreciate your having taken the time to read and give this nice comment,David.
Date: 11/28/2020 4:29:00 PM
Hello Wendy, what would we do without Santa? I wonder. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 12/19/2020 4:16:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting,Darlene. Happy Christmas!
Date: 11/28/2020 10:05:00 AM
Clever girl! Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Rico
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