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Sensuality

Exchanged smiles and smirks Between this girl and that guy With constant tugs and jerks Emotions they now run high Supernovas and fire works! When the sparks begin to fly! No longer in the passenger seat Now one is taking full command The taste of her heavenly sweet Aided by the touch of ones hand And there hearts now they retreat Now taken to a far out wonderland And her body it now begins shaking Exploring all those erogenous zones These two spirits are now awakening With the constant moans and groans These two souls are now love making Air filled with the smell of pheromones And One another’s ears are now ringing Having shared that moment of intensity These to lovers who are left spine tingling Having just had that feeling of intimacy Kindred spirits there hearts now singing With all those pleasures of sensuality With this trying to put emphisis on the phisical feeling of love between to people unlike the original verse Ive took off so many times this I felt less explicid well hope so trying to use metaphores did not know where to go with this tryed diffrent patterns sorry if seems offensive or rude what else can I say ,,,,,,,.............................,,PC GONE O,T,T? WRITTEN BY MY SELF DAVIDSCOTT ORIGINALY JUNE JULY 2012 REWRITTEN MAR2013 INSPIERD ALSO BY OTHER MEMBERS ON THE SOUP WHO BLOW ME AWY WITH THERE WRITES ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,x ds

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Date: 4/21/2013 4:36:00 PM
Sensual indeed David.... you sure know your stuff :) enjoyed love Elizabeth xx
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Date: 4/3/2013 11:39:00 AM
I thought it was very tastefully done David...everyone loves a love poem...Donna
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Date: 3/26/2013 10:25:00 PM
Very good read. Enjoyed this piece.
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