Sensory Overload

What if woke up one day-
and you could not see or hear? 

Would you find twisted relief?-
Or would your mind resort to fear?

If I could hear no sound- 
I wouldn't hear you when you yell.

(But) I'd hear no genuinity--
when your heart begins to spill.

I'd hear no more excuses-
to justify the hurt you've caused me.

But I also wouldn't hear-
about the future that you've promised me.

If I could no longer touch-
I couldn't feel a blades Sharp edge.

I wouldn't feel your Kisses though-
when we tangle up in bed.

Nor would I feel my tears fall-
when my heart, again, should shatter.

But I wouldn't feel your heartbeat- 
against my cheek when things got better.

I'm not sure what I'd do-
if my eyes did lose their sight. 

But I know I wouldn't see-
 your perfect smile light up the night.

I wouldn't see your sad or hurt-
I wouldn't see your Face at all.

I couldnt dive into your eyes- 
or the tears I cause to fall. 

If I could not taste-
our every kiss would feel so hollow.

I wouldn't taste the venom spoken- 
nor the pills I have to swallow.

I do not know which sense I'd choose- 
if made to pick just one.

I'm overwhelmed with all of them- 
but without them, I'd be numb.

So tell me, which would you choose?-
What would make your choice be final? 

Which would cause you lesser pain?- 
But also, make that sense worth while?

-Sensory Overload-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 9/22/2023 12:21:00 AM
Hi chelsea . Really beautiful poem . Really captures the screwed if you do and equaly screwed ( polar opposite way ofcourse )if you dont choices the universe decides to throw at people. You may not remeber me but im jessis (soon to be hopefully) exhusband . I tried getting ahold of you on facebook but there were difficulties. I was hoping on being able to talk to you .the biggest weakness for people that hurt people is when those people talk, me ,you , yours and you may all benefit from thistalk
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