Senses

The senses are intended to mislead
a man in love. I know, his watchful eye
can see the angels flying in the sky
but drawbacks of his ladylove, indeed.

He's ears sharp enough to hear a bead
of water working rocks, a quiet sigh
of endless starless space and even thy
conspiratorial whisper, thinking reed.

But he is deaf to platitudes, buzzwords,
suburban accent, vulgarisms and odds
and ends because he listens to the sound

of metaphysic harmonies inside
his own heart. He keeps eyes open wide
to see love crossing its transcendent bound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dunlap Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Delightful poem. The rhyme. is handled perfectly and helps immensely in moving the narrative along.
Dunlap Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 6:15 PM
I enjoyed your poems. I read 3 of them. Nicely done with the rhyme, which is not the easiest thing to accomplish.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Hello Kurt Ravidas, oh so nice to see love come your way. I hav enjoyed this poem.A well written love poem. have a nice day my friend.
Lindley Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Being deaf has its advantages, no waking to siren sounds, thunder and insects buzzing in ones ear. Being deaf to those your fine verse names even better for a true and original poet! Helps to sometimes be blind to certain things as well. Great poem my friend. A definite fav, too.
Ravidas Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:40 AM
Reading your comments, I'm luminesceing with pleasure like a mushroom) Thank you very much, Robert.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 1:19 AM
This is poetry, pure and simple, and uplifts me. " because he listens to the sound of metaphysic harmonies inside his own heart. " Love that part, Kurt.
Ravidas Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 9:14 AM
I love you love it, Caren. Rays of love)
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