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Senses

The senses are intended to mislead a man in love. I know, his watchful eye can see the angels flying in the sky but drawbacks of his ladylove, indeed. He's ears sharp enough to hear a bead of water working rocks, a quiet sigh of endless starless space and even thy conspiratorial whisper, thinking reed. But he is deaf to platitudes, buzzwords, suburban accent, vulgarisms and odds and ends because he listens to the sound of metaphysic harmonies inside his own heart. He keeps eyes open wide to see love crossing its transcendent bound.

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Date: 6/27/2019 6:29:00 PM
Delightful poem. The rhyme. is handled perfectly and helps immensely in moving the narrative along.
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Date: 6/27/2019 6:15:00 PM
I enjoyed your poems. I read 3 of them. Nicely done with the rhyme, which is not the easiest thing to accomplish.
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Date: 5/13/2019 2:44:00 PM
Hello Kurt Ravidas, oh so nice to see love come your way. I hav enjoyed this poem.A well written love poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/19/2019 5:21:00 PM
Being deaf has its advantages, no waking to siren sounds, thunder and insects buzzing in ones ear. Being deaf to those your fine verse names even better for a true and original poet! Helps to sometimes be blind to certain things as well. Great poem my friend. A definite fav, too.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/20/2019 4:40:00 AM
Reading your comments, I'm luminesceing with pleasure like a mushroom) Thank you very much, Robert.
Date: 4/17/2019 1:19:00 AM
This is poetry, pure and simple, and uplifts me. " because he listens to the sound of metaphysic harmonies inside his own heart. " Love that part, Kurt.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/17/2019 9:14:00 AM
I love you love it, Caren. Rays of love)

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