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Sensed Him Before I Saw Him

I sensed him before I saw him. Felt his heavy hot breath on the back of my neck. I knew he would be large. I turned; he was enormous. Darker than I imagined a nine-foot grizzly bear. I had always thought they were dark brown. This was one black as a patent leather shoe. He had a roar that would knock a train off its tracks. Knowing this I roared first. My roar came from the hallows of hell. He gave me a look of pure fear, hesitated a minute, then turned and ran off. On four legs, not on two. Never to return. I am thrilled to say I can outroar a grizzly if I have to.

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Date: 10/7/2021 9:35:00 AM
I've never encountered a bear, but you have given me a thought about how I might react. Surely this is fiction...right? It's a superb write, though.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/7/2021 11:06:00 AM
It is fiction. I was on my way to my car when I felt that i was being watched. My next thought was "what if it is a grizzly?" and my third thought was "how am I going to remember this idea all the way to school?"
Date: 10/6/2021 8:45:00 PM
Goodness Caren, I hope this isn't true.
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Date: 10/7/2021 8:15:00 AM
I felt eyes on me this morning as I headed to my car and I thought "what if it is a grizzly bear?" can I out-roar him?

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