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“Divert your eyes from your mobile devices ... you may get a pleasant surprise” Quote by the Poet I love the transition from season to season White winter beauty when snowflakes are falling down British weather can change without rhyme or reason When April showers fall in the country or town Autumn's my favourite season, some call it fall As dying foliage drifts down from lofty trees I've loved walking through crunchy leaves since I was small I'll wrap up warmly to combat the bitter breeze Such vibrant colours of orange, yellow and red Farmers gather all their crops from out in the fields Golden pumpkins grown in the vegetable bed  I adore nature's beauty that this season yields Our ever changing landscape I truly adore From January all the way to December I aim to take photos as I walk out my door Must grab my Pentax... sometimes I don't remember! I love the transition from season to season Autumn's my favourite season, some call it fall Such vibrant colours of orange, yellow and red Our ever changing landscape I truly adore My Created Form- Rhyme4 Mix Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 12 syllables per line 12/08/20

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Date: 12/15/2020 3:59:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too and I like your image _Constance
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Date: 12/13/2020 6:28:00 PM
Embracing changing seasons with lovely imagery, congrats on your win, Jan!
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Date: 12/13/2020 4:50:00 PM
As I read through this poem, I realize that in some way, they are ALL your favorite season, Jan. Well done!
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Date: 12/13/2020 2:50:00 PM
Hi Jan, This is a lovely tribute piece to the Autumn season. Good content and stunning imagery. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/13/2020 11:12:00 AM
I'm back to congratulate you, Jan, on your Top placement in the contest!!
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Date: 12/11/2020 1:12:00 PM
A lovely autumnal piece Jan, so well penned indeed such beautiful words indeed. Hope hubby still doing ok, I had my regular PSA blood test this week so get a call from hospital next week . Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 12/9/2020 11:15:00 AM
Great write, Jan. personally, I would like autumn a lot more if it was followed by any season other than winter. Mind you, at least I can put the lawn mower away... maybe we’ll leave autumn where it is. Nice work. Terry
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Date: 12/9/2020 10:58:00 AM
You are clearly the fastest growing poet on poetrysoup! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:36:00 AM
A very nice crafting of imagery. Great job Jan!
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Mark i try my best:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/8/2020 8:15:00 PM
Just splendid, Jan. A cornucopia of color, transitions, love and hope. Wonderful write! Season's Best, Gershon
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:30:00 AM
thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/8/2020 5:46:00 PM
I love this, Jan. Superb writing as usual. Nothing beats the colours of the fall. Good luck in the contest... Hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:29:00 AM
I would love to visit the US in the fall, perhaps one day we will get there:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/8/2020 5:12:00 PM
- I love your Quote, Jan .... the poem is wonderful - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:26:00 AM
We are surrounded by so much natural beauty my friend but people can be so absorbed in technology they fail to see it:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 12/8/2020 3:22:00 PM
I love this beautiful piece about the changing beauty of nature, Jan!!!
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:24:00 AM
thanks Newton:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:24:00 AM
thanks Newton:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 12/8/2020 3:13:00 PM
Hello Jan … yes, I too love all the seasons with their different offerings, but autumn appears to be the most stable of them all - enjoyed Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 12/9/2020 8:24:00 AM
thanks Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/8/2020 2:29:00 PM
Enjoyed your journey through the seasons Jan, each one beautiful in its own way. Tom
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Date: 12/8/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Tom i especially love Autumn, have taken some lovely sunsets recently and pictures of trees I must see if I can sort them out and write a poem:-) hugs Jan xx

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