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Sensational Lovemaking

SENSATIONAL LOVEMAKING Rush of adrenalin, lifting his shirted-scent to my nose - soaked in apropos, making love to my endorphins. The stir and footfall from downstairs - his lair, even when he’s not there, for I can hear his heart beat miles and miles and miles away. Tongues swathed in mint, trestlework of undulation, swoosh of utter breezes. The cool tingling sensation, fingertips that ripple round, the sucking sound, the honey’d stick of becoming one flesh, seersuckers gently upon my nape, always intact, traveling miles and miles downtown, rippling rapture, torturous-pleasure. 12/13/2019 Smell sound taste touch repeat sense. Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sheri Harper

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Date: 12/19/2019 1:47:00 AM
This is love. "for I can hear his heart beat miles and miles and miles away."- I get this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2019 9:21:00 AM
Yes! This morning I awoke with the blanket clinging to me, thinking it was him. Sweet tomorrow will come!
Date: 12/16/2019 1:14:00 PM
Wow, now that was really nicely done. Very sensual my friend, though very classy in design and expression.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 12/16/2019 5:46:00 AM
This is truly a romantic, sensual delight my friend. You hit it deep in this exquisite piece!! A fav-- a gem too...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert!
Date: 12/13/2019 12:52:00 PM
Wow! Talk about engaging the senses! This simply entices and then overwhelms them! Once again, Wow! Smiles, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
Date: 12/13/2019 12:30:00 PM
Phew, a well written verse to make the temperatures rise Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2019 12:56:00 PM
Ooh la la!
Date: 12/13/2019 10:40:00 AM
I am with Jennier on this one. To write with much delicacy about sensuality with skilled intricacy is an art. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2019 12:55:00 PM
Thanks so much! xx
Date: 12/13/2019 10:37:00 AM
I feel that this is a true winning poem - great imagery - best of luck and Christmas blessings Kim. Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2019 12:55:00 PM
Christmas blessings to you too, Jennifer!
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