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Senryu - Kiss

pouted lips head turned away a missed kiss

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/11/2013 8:48:00 PM

Very sweet write, John! Congrats on your win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 10:22:00 AM

nice win John...PD

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:07:00 AM

Thank you, PD Have a wonderful day!

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/9/2013 8:55:00 AM

nicely penned...congrats on your win :)

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:08:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra. Have a nice day!

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/8/2013 5:55:00 PM

Good one, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:09:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Have a great day!

Kiran Bantawa

Date: 11/8/2013 4:40:00 PM

congrats!

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:11:00 AM

Thank you , Kiran. Have a wonderful day!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/8/2013 8:20:00 AM

Great senryu here John!Congrats on your big win.

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:12:00 AM

Thank you, kash poet. Have a nice day!

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 11:02:00 PM

Love the senryu, John , Congratulations, on your win........ LOVE ~SKAT~

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, Skat. Best wishes to you!

John Posey

Date: 11/7/2013 6:26:00 PM

So this is the way to write a senryu... OK I'll file this in my how to file.... Great work, my friend...congratulations.... Jake

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:17:00 AM

Thank you, Jake. This was my first senryu. I am glad you like it. All the best to you!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/7/2013 6:09:00 PM

Glad I didn't miss this one. Congrats on a super win. BG

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:18:00 AM

Thank you, Barbara. Have a wonderful day!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/7/2013 4:17:00 PM

Yes, indeed. Nice one, John. Congrats!

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Juliet. Have a great day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2013 3:29:00 PM

Nicely done, and Big congrats.

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:21:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Best wishes to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2013 8:01:00 AM

- Well done, senryu John ! - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Beharry
Date: 11/9/2013 11:22:00 AM

Thank you, Anne Lise. Have a nice day!