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Senryu

similar to haiku strong personal impact sees our human nature set syllable amount structure is critical sometimes satirical sounds very poetic FIRST PLACE WINNER Written January 21, 2022 For “Write About a Form” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Syllable checked by HMS

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2022 1:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day and weekend..................

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/25/2022 2:01:00 PM

Paula, thanks so much for your read and your comment.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/20/2022 3:42:00 AM

Great work on Senryu. Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/25/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thanks, Chris. I appreciate it.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/19/2022 5:10:00 PM

Great job, Milton, CONGRATS! Janice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/25/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. I certainly always enjoy hearing from you.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/19/2022 5:05:00 PM

Beautifully arranged Milton. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings xxoo

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/25/2022 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Your comments are always so welcomed.

Joseph May

Date: 2/19/2022 3:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win Milton, Very nicely done

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/25/2022 2:02:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/22/2022 3:19:00 PM

I love the way you carried through without capitals honoring the senryu form Milton, yet using the proper Pleiades form called for. You captured this form perfectly in your entry. This should great. Blessings xxoo

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/22/2022 5:35:00 PM

Ah, thank you so much, Connie. I certainly hope so. I was some time deciding whether I wanted to enter this contest and what form to write about. Senryu seemed a good fit for me.