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Senryu

so I’m quick to quit a real “let’s move on” girl but you said “goodbye” 7/8/18 real has 2 syllables

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Date: 8/6/2018 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win! :)
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Date: 8/6/2018 2:17:00 AM
Nicely done, Sian, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2018 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Sian.
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Date: 8/3/2018 10:10:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sian. I like the haziness, works really well here.
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Date: 8/3/2018 6:58:00 PM
Sad but powerful, Sian! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/3/2018 2:39:00 PM
a comeuppance senryu for yourself? I sure like this one!! Congrats for the win.
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Date: 8/3/2018 12:12:00 PM
Call me weird, I don't find this one sad, au contaire, empowering. Gotta love poetry that way ;) Congrats on your first place win! xomo
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Date: 7/9/2018 8:20:00 AM
Melonchony Senryu.. I love it!
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