Awkward

awkward silence both wondering how this can end gracefully Submitted on July 6, 2018 for SENRYU CONTEST sponsored by MICK TALBOT - RANKED 2ND

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 4:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Clever!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2018 6:52:00 PM

Thanks, Susan, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/5/2018 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/5/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/4/2018 2:53:00 PM

Such a challenging situation refelcted in this very excellent Senryu! Congrats, my friend on your sweet win! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2018 11:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Pandita.

Mark Toney

Date: 8/4/2018 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line. Who will be the first to respond, yeah?

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2018 11:46:00 PM

LOL Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/4/2018 7:41:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this senryu to which we can probably all say "Been there, done that"! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2018 11:47:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Janice.

Roy Pett

Date: 8/4/2018 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Line with your cleverly written and thought provoking Senryu. :))

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thank you, Roy. Much appreciated.

Moon Flower

Date: 8/4/2018 4:04:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Line. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thank you, Moon. Much appreciated.

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/4/2018 12:50:00 AM

nice point. Congrats. My answer - why bother with graceful?

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2018 7:17:00 AM

LOL. Thanks for your visit, Virginia.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/3/2018 7:11:00 PM

Yes, those moments are sometimes painful, Line. Well-captured in your Senryu, and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2018 7:22:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 2:50:00 PM

Really like this one, Line. Congrats for the win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2018 5:58:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/3/2018 1:08:00 PM

Hmmm, I like this one ;) Congrats on your win! xomo

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 10:53:00 PM

Love this, LG.. if you learn to embrace ackward you are so far ahead of 95% of the people you deal with.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2018 6:00:00 AM

True. Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, LM.

Anil Deo

Date: 7/6/2018 5:30:00 PM

I get this, sometimes, at the very beginning, LOL! Thanks Line. Peace/shalom all weekend long.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2018 7:41:00 PM

Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Anil.