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Senryu- Last Gasp

my soul is empty since your last gasp of this life . . . our bond strong as death _____________________ July 5, 2018 Added, after contest judged August 3, 2018 ________________________ Poetry/Senryu/last gasp Copyright Protected, ID 18-1038-281-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Senryu sponsor Mick Talbot Third Place

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Date: 8/6/2018 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/5/2018 2:23:00 PM
Constance, this is so sad. Congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2018 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Heart. Very poignant, heartrending senryu.
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Date: 8/3/2018 11:35:00 PM
O love it. Congrats, Dear Heart.
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Date: 8/3/2018 7:19:00 PM
Sad thoughts beautifully stated in your deep Senryu, Constance. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/3/2018 3:21:00 PM
This is a most poignant one, Constance. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 8/3/2018 2:51:00 PM
Back with congrats <3 <3 <3
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Date: 7/5/2018 4:08:00 PM
Potent tender penning dear Poetess xomo
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Date: 7/5/2018 11:08:00 AM
Excellence in your name! Great ink!
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