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Senryu - One Last Drink

Senryu - One Last Drink while binge drinking an alcoholic vows to quit… after one last drink 07-15-2018 Contest: Senryu Contest Sponsor: Mick Talbot Placement: 1st

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/24/2018 11:30:00 AM

Hi Pandita, much said within such few words. Much belated congratulations on your win Pandita, much deserved. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/24/2018 8:16:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend. Your kind words mean a lot to me! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend. Hugs. Pandita

Anil Deo

Date: 8/7/2018 5:03:00 PM

Yeah, I must quit also. May I discuss this tomorrow? shalom, shalom

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/8/2018 11:24:00 AM

Hi Anil, thank you my friend for your kind support. Remember to do all things in moderation! Best wishes always. Pandita

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win! Oh I know that feeling... just one more... so glad don't have to do that anymore. :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/8/2018 11:20:00 AM

Hi Susan, thank you, my friend for your congratulations and insightful comments. I salute all those who have been able to overcome their addictions, and pray for all those who are still struggling! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 8/6/2018 2:16:00 AM

Nicely done, Pandita, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/8/2018 11:18:00 AM

Hi Eve, thank you so very much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Have a lovely day! Best regards. Pandita

Mark Toney

Date: 8/4/2018 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win, Pandita. Very thought-provoking message in 12 short words!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/4/2018 3:11:00 PM

Hi Mark, thank you so very much my friend for your wonderful, complimentary words which I so greatly appreciate! Best wishes. Pandita

Roy Pett

Date: 8/4/2018 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita, so much truth within your well written Senryu. :))

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/4/2018 3:05:00 PM

Roy, I am so appreciative of your lovely compliments. Thank you very much! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/4/2018 12:53:00 AM

boom! that sure said it. Good winner

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/4/2018 2:55:00 PM

Hi Virginia, thank you my friend for your kind words of praise. Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/3/2018 10:07:00 PM

Sad to watch. Great senryu, Pandita. Congrats on your top win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/4/2018 2:48:00 PM

Thank you dear Line for your very kind complimentary words! Hope you are enjoying a lovely weekedn! Hugs. Pandita

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/3/2018 6:56:00 PM

Yes, for sure it always goes that way for them, Pandita. Well done, and congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/4/2018 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for your kind words of praise which I greatly appreciate. I am so happy you enjoyed this piece. Hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 2:37:00 PM

That is exactly how it plays out. Congrats on your win, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/3/2018 2:43:00 PM

Dear Andie, thank you my dear friend for your always lovely compliments which I so very much appreciate! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/3/2018 12:19:00 PM

Back with congrats Pandita, cheers. Tom

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/3/2018 12:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend for returning with your kind congratulations! Have a great weekend. Hugs. Pandita

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/3/2018 12:07:00 PM

A vat of truth in that! Awesome Senryu Pandita, hugs and congratulations! xomo :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/3/2018 12:51:00 PM

Hi Maureen, thank you so very much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Have a beautiful weekend! Best regards. Pandita

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/31/2018 3:41:00 PM

You've nailed it, Pandita … Once an alcoholic, btw, you've never quit drinking until you're dead … Nice senryu! ~ Gershon

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/1/2018 4:25:00 PM

My friend, as always, many thanks, for your kind support and compliments! Unfortunately, that is a true statement about alcoholism! Hope you are doing well! All the very best to you. Pandita

Lunita Blanca

Date: 7/29/2018 8:49:00 PM

Very well put Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2018 8:54:00 AM

Carlos, I very much appreciate your compliment and thank you for stopping by! Best regards. Pandita

Warren Doll

Date: 7/28/2018 11:51:00 AM

Very well thought out and an excellent Senryu, Pandita. / Warren :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/28/2018 7:25:00 PM

Thank you, Warren, for your very sweet compliments that I truly appreciate! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/21/2018 12:18:00 PM

Very clever, Pandita but so realistic, too. The drugs and the alcohol were easy to quit but the cigarettes are a different story.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/21/2018 1:22:00 PM

So true any form of addiction is challenging to quit! Thank you kindly, dear friend, for your always supportive and encouraging words! Love and hugs.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/18/2018 6:19:00 AM

You have spoken such true words...Pandita Like a smoker says, just one last cigarette. Habits ARE so hard to quit. Love this write...Good Luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/18/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Charlie, for your insightful comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice day, my friend! Hugs. Pandita