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Senryu - One Last Drink

Senryu  - One Last Drink


while binge drinking an
alcoholic vows to quit…
after one last drink


07-15-2018

Contest:     Senryu Contest 
Sponsor:    Mick Talbot
Placement: 1st

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/24/2018 11:30:00 AM
Hi Pandita, much said within such few words. Much belated congratulations on your win Pandita, much deserved. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 11/24/2018 8:16:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Your kind words mean a lot to me! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/7/2018 5:03:00 PM
Yeah, I must quit also. May I discuss this tomorrow? shalom, shalom
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/8/2018 11:24:00 AM
Hi Anil, thank you my friend for your kind support. Remember to do all things in moderation! Best wishes always. Pandita
Date: 8/6/2018 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win! Oh I know that feeling... just one more... so glad don't have to do that anymore. :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/8/2018 11:20:00 AM
Hi Susan, thank you, my friend for your congratulations and insightful comments. I salute all those who have been able to overcome their addictions, and pray for all those who are still struggling! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/6/2018 2:16:00 AM
Nicely done, Pandita, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/8/2018 11:18:00 AM
Hi Eve, thank you so very much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Have a lovely day! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 8/4/2018 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Pandita. Very thought-provoking message in 12 short words!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/4/2018 3:11:00 PM
Hi Mark, thank you so very much my friend for your wonderful, complimentary words which I so greatly appreciate! Best wishes. Pandita
Date: 8/4/2018 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Pandita, so much truth within your well written Senryu. :))
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/4/2018 3:05:00 PM
Roy, I am so appreciative of your lovely compliments. Thank you very much! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 8/4/2018 12:53:00 AM
boom! that sure said it. Good winner
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/4/2018 2:55:00 PM
Hi Virginia, thank you my friend for your kind words of praise. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/3/2018 10:07:00 PM
Sad to watch. Great senryu, Pandita. Congrats on your top win.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/4/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thank you dear Line for your very kind complimentary words! Hope you are enjoying a lovely weekedn! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/3/2018 6:56:00 PM
Yes, for sure it always goes that way for them, Pandita. Well done, and congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/4/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for your kind words of praise which I greatly appreciate. I am so happy you enjoyed this piece. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/3/2018 2:37:00 PM
That is exactly how it plays out. Congrats on your win, Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/3/2018 2:43:00 PM
Dear Andie, thank you my dear friend for your always lovely compliments which I so very much appreciate! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita
Date: 8/3/2018 12:19:00 PM
Back with congrats Pandita, cheers. Tom
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/3/2018 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend for returning with your kind congratulations! Have a great weekend. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/3/2018 12:07:00 PM
A vat of truth in that! Awesome Senryu Pandita, hugs and congratulations! xomo :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/3/2018 12:51:00 PM
Hi Maureen, thank you so very much for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Have a beautiful weekend! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 7/31/2018 3:41:00 PM
You've nailed it, Pandita … Once an alcoholic, btw, you've never quit drinking until you're dead … Nice senryu! ~ Gershon
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/1/2018 4:25:00 PM
My friend, as always, many thanks, for your kind support and compliments! Unfortunately, that is a true statement about alcoholism! Hope you are doing well! All the very best to you. Pandita
Date: 7/29/2018 8:49:00 PM
Very well put Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/30/2018 8:54:00 AM
Carlos, I very much appreciate your compliment and thank you for stopping by! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 7/28/2018 11:51:00 AM
Very well thought out and an excellent Senryu, Pandita. / Warren :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/28/2018 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Warren, for your very sweet compliments that I truly appreciate! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 7/23/2018 6:31:00 AM
There are quite many of those last drinks. A fabulous Senryu, Pandita. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/23/2018 9:47:00 AM
Hi T.J., thank you so very much, my friend! Have a great week ahead! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/21/2018 12:18:00 PM
Very clever, Pandita but so realistic, too. The drugs and the alcohol were easy to quit but the cigarettes are a different story.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/21/2018 1:22:00 PM
So true any form of addiction is challenging to quit! Thank you kindly, dear friend, for your always supportive and encouraging words! Love and hugs.
Date: 7/18/2018 6:19:00 AM
You have spoken such true words...Pandita Like a smoker says, just one last cigarette. Habits ARE so hard to quit. Love this write...Good Luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/18/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Charlie, for your insightful comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice day, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/17/2018 2:19:00 PM
That's the way it goes for most alcoholics; few are able to quit themselves. Well done.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/17/2018 3:27:00 PM
It is such an unfortunate truth! Thank you, ML for kindly commenting on this piece! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 7/16/2018 8:49:00 AM
Pandita.. I'll drink to that! This was a fun and clever piece much enjoyed!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/16/2018 9:10:00 AM
Hi LM, thank you so very much! :-) Have a great week ahead! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/15/2018 7:06:00 PM
...and the vicious cycle continues. Nice one Pandita
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/15/2018 7:37:00 PM
Hi John, thank you, my friend! Yes, it's one big vicious cycle! Have a relaxing evening. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/15/2018 5:13:00 PM
Oh, what insight you have!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/15/2018 5:19:00 PM
Awwww! Thank you so very much, Sunlite! I appreciate your lovely compliments! Hugs and best wishes. Pandita
Date: 7/15/2018 3:34:00 PM
Haha, until the next one. Good luck. Tom
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/15/2018 4:11:00 PM
So happy you like this one, Tom! Thank you so much, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 7/15/2018 3:13:00 PM
So true..well put my friend..my best wishes for a win.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/15/2018 3:16:00 PM
I'm always honored by your encouraging and supportive visits,my friend! Best regards. Pandita