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Senryu - One For Me, One For You

forests of my heart evergreen human seasons sun and snow melt me majestic mountain cobbled stone - rarefied air - divine ambition

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/20/2017 9:12:00 AM

Morning Anil. You are the clever one. Yes, one for me one for you. The beauty and grace for me and you that you share. May we all see and know the blessing of nature and the present moment in time as well. Well done completely with the execution. Have a wonderful day. Shalom

Anil Deo

Date: 4/18/2017 5:42:00 PM

Lynn Marie and Brother Trifiatis, you are so encouraging and generous. Shalom and many blessings for your support & kind reviews. Anil Deo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/18/2017 10:37:00 AM

What a marvel of Haiku dear Anil! Certainly a 7 for each!

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/18/2017 1:25:00 AM

Lovely imagery ...beautiful words Anil:) Fine Poetry ...smile inducing title:) blessings xxx