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Senryu - Ballerina At Midnight

senryu - ballerina at midnight firebird in slippers surrounded by garden snares — saved by the moonlight 10/25/2018 Senryu-Haiku - October 2018 - Writing Challenge Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings - Sponsor

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/29/2018 9:18:00 AM

Well done! Great imagery in this one; I can see it all.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 9:32:00 AM

Awesome! Thanks, M.L.!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/27/2018 9:29:00 PM

Wow! This is so vivid! Superb! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2018 4:55:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon, my friend!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/26/2018 1:45:00 PM

Such beauty and passion in this lovely piece Kim! Outstanding imagery! : )

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2018 3:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/26/2018 12:44:00 PM

Every word puts a lilt of happiness in my soul, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2018 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, Caren!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/26/2018 12:40:00 PM

Bursting with imagery, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2018 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, Line :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/26/2018 12:26:00 PM

Beautiful and enchanting little write Kim. You packed a lot into three short lines.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2018 12:33:00 PM

Thanks so much, Chris!