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Oh, yes, that time has surely come- the winter of our years; try keeping busy having fun and hang out with our peers. On senior bus trips off we go, the highlight of our day. But walkers and those footed canes sure do get in our way. Like ducklings waddling 'cross the floor to meet the guide in pairs, we follow him or her around and pray there are no stairs. And soon it's time to see the show and thought we had our place to sit next to our special friends, then find there is no space! 'Cause we got lost along the way- when leaving the restroom! So, now in dark, get seated near- some gal with strong perfume! And soon the time has surely come- the curtains rise with cheers. So tired of saying 'who' and 'what'- stuff hearing aids in ears. Oh yes, those days have surely come- the winter of our time; just keep on going having fun- pretend it's summertime! August 26, 2016 For Contest, A Rhyming Poem For Fun Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 9/23/2016 8:38:00 PM
I enjoyed your fun winning poem. Congrats.
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Date: 9/23/2016 7:25:00 AM
Pretend it is summertime..I really like that line..It has good flow and rhythm and that I do like..Thanks for your entry in my contest..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2016 4:30:00 PM
Well written and in good form. 7 in my book. Congratulations. Blessings, Janis.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/22/2016 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janis! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/27/2016 2:14:00 AM
Oh I love your wonderfully aware entry Sandra! You mention so many of the concerns seniors have...especially stairs! I am sure to see this one at the top Sandra. 7 ; )
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