Notes About The Poem

I plan on going full tilt until one day I just plain run out of gas and drop.

Then they can do whatever they want with what's left because I won't be there anymore.

Senior Citizen Number One

Being a senior citizen,
Sure has it's ups and downs.
It seems I'm learning something new,
Each time I turn around.

Things are different now for me,
Than when I was young.
I'm older and much wiser now,
And life's a lot more fun.

I used to think when I got old,
The fun would all be over.
I'd sit and rock and dream about,
Bygone days of clover.

Days of fun and frolic that,
Were filled with love, adventure;
But it turns out that just ain't so,
In youth I was indentured;

Tied to duty and my job,
I worried 'bout my payments.
House and car and credit cards,
Each month was filled with statements.

Now I'm free to do my thing,
Slow down and smell the roses.
I've wrinkles and gray hair, so what.
Don't look down your noses,

At us old folks 'cause you think,
We're old and dumb, not with it.
'Cause we've been down that road before,
And you, my friend, can have it.

This senior thing has got it's edge,
And I've put in my bid,
To head the list, be number one,
As the world's oldest kid.

           YeeeHaaaa!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 7:50 PM
you are a lucky one, Judy. I fear I will be working till I die. No pensions for either me or Joe. Just a lousy social security check that might not be around by the time I can start collecting it. Anyway, you are right that we can still enjoy our life. I will always enjoy it as long as I can.
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November 12, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. I'm still working full time too at 69 yrs young but don't really mind it because it keeps me busy and I get paid. My husband is retired and it seems he is now in the early stages of senility. God Bless, JB
Hardison Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:41 AM
Marvelous poem. I share view in poet's notes. Peace, Love and Joy.
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November 12, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Thank you so much John. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Your poem made me smile Judy that final stanza is such fun love your poets notes too lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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November 10, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Thank you so much Jan. Glad you like it. God Bless, JB
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