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Premiere Contest WinnerSelf-Actualization


Sometimes we look to closest friends,  
Expressly those who think we're ace:   
Let them confirm our worth but still       
Forget, inside us lies the proof.            

Actualization calls for a
Command of strength and keen logic
To shape ourselves, at last, to get
Unknown rewards on our plateau.
And with revealed goals, we take a
Lone journey through heart and soul
In our quest...a long safari,
Zestfully seeking life's pizzazz,
And a fruitful new arena
That hones our talents as our gift.
Inner joy promotes stimuli
Of further searches, that lead to
New trails of self-completion.


Sandra M. Haight

~First Place~
Premiere Contest: Self Actualization Double Acrostic
Sponsor: San Woo
Judged: 11/13/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 16, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Congratulations, respect in writing a difficult acrostic. San Woo excels at these, she's such a tease, you showed her! :)
Michelle Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations, wonderful poem
Smith Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Not sure how you do this but you do it well, congratulations Sandra...
White Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Such a wonderful win, such a difficult contest. Congratulations:)
Daniel Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Back to congratulate you on your great trophy win, Sandra:) very nice:)
Murray Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 6:17 AM
A perfect piece. Well done Sandra.
Neumann Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Nice one. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Poteet Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 8:40 PM
congrats to you Sandra for an excellent acrostic (double). I think you have arrived at a highly satisfactory self-actualization personally.
Teagan Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Wowwwww you did that! Sure looked difficult...but you made it look easy. Very awesome! Congrats!
Raina Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Amazing flow....enjoyed reading it...congratulations of your top placement!!
La France Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Sandra congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful double Acrostic ~
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:22 PM
Thank you very much, Constance! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Sandra a very deserving trophy for your cabinet:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:22 PM
Thank you very much, Jan. I was surprised! Hugs, Sandra
Inman Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 11:19 AM
A lovely write Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Thank you so much, James. Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations, Sandra! Nicely done!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your top placement in this very challenging competition. You did a great job with it. Blessings, Janis.
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Thank you so much, Janis! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win :-) these looks like a very difficult write to add the acrostic at the end. Your talent show in this write * I didn't even try . Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Eve, for your uplifting and supportive comments. Yes, a bit challenging it certainly was, but fun to work out. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:56 PM
You are the only other I've read who used 'pizzazz' as your end 'z' word. I think your flow and content read easily, intelligently and are full of insight. Last line, did you mean 'to' or want 'of'? Trying to help, just in case, either do work. A fine and impressive job, Sandra! CayCay
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 12:47 PM
I used pizzazz too lol it fitted well with the flow of my poem - I found Z and two i's quite a challenge:-)hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, CayCay...yes, that 'z' was difficult! Guess we thought alike! I appreciate your supportive comments so much. 'To' or 'of'...thought a while, and I think your suggestion of 'of' is better. Thanks for the help! Hugs, Sandra
Nayak Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 12:50 PM
wow! lovely! essence of self atualisation penned so well dear Sandra, good luck in the contest//love, Anu:)
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Thank you so much, Anu, for your lovely comments and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:55 AM
Very nicely composed, Sandra:)
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Thank you very much, Jo! Hugs, Sandra
Kannan Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Wow...This is perfectly... Neatly done.. Good luck with the contest...A 7...
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:23 PM
Thank you very much, Supraja, for your uplifting comments and high rating! Much appreciated! Sandra
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