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self sabotage

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for Constance's "Write One Beautiful Line" Poetry Contest

innate bliss undone by the effortlessly tangled knots

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/3/2025 11:52:00 AM

" effortlessly tangled knots" that!!! Speaks volumes! What a powerful one liner! Very well written dear DD, i see from comments below that this received a win! Congratulations!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/3/2025 2:38:00 PM

Thanks Ink :) I'm not great at beautiful lines, so this was a challenge for me. Sounds right up your street though for version 2 of the contrast, out now :)

Terry Miller

Date: 3/3/2025 2:19:00 AM

What a thoughtful line, congratulations

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/3/2025 4:40:00 AM

Thank you Terry :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2025 3:28:00 PM

Profound one liner there! Congrats on the win.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/3/2025 4:39:00 AM

Thanks Andrea :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/2/2025 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love your fun write. This can mean so many different things. Making us think??? That is good. Enjoy your day and win...................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/2/2025 8:08:00 AM

Haha thanks Paula, it's definitely only about overthinking lol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2025 2:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful line, D.D. :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/2/2025 2:34:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, I appreciate your kind supportive words x

Jan Allison

Date: 2/27/2025 3:44:00 PM

made me think trying to remove skimpy underwear in a hurry (lol)- but it does have a much deeper meaning i know. hugs jan x

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/27/2025 10:44:00 PM

I thought I'd averted misinterpretation by the word 'effortlessly' haha. Now I'm worried the Kama Sutra might send me advice sheets lol