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Self Portrait With Cigarette- Edvard Munch Painting

Who have I painted this for This reflection of my core My introspection wonders back An injection of epiphany It drifts from me like smoke Suddenly aware I see Nothing that looks like clarity In the shadows I am pondering A stillness caught by candlelight If I stop watching you paint me Will myself in frame then cease to be The quiet trickles down like falling ash From a cigarette only just lit As my eyes play tricks And test my wits I ask myself which side I'm on And who is watching who

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Date: 7/29/2023 8:31:00 PM
Congratulations on this being in the top 100 Hat x
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Date: 7/29/2023 2:53:00 PM
Excellent poetry, Hat. Very thought-provoking and also intriguing. Congrats on the Top 100 New Poem list poem! Have a great weekend! Bill
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Date: 7/29/2023 5:57:00 PM
Oh neat, thank you Bill!
Date: 7/14/2023 9:49:00 PM
Hat, this ekphrasis crosses into the realm of excellence and mastery of the poetic form. Using poetic musings and introspection of Munch is just plain brilliant. Congratulations on your top win! A masterful piece. Blessings! A fav!
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Sam, what kind Comments :)
Date: 7/14/2023 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Hat! … The quiet trickles down like falling ash From a cigarette only just lit
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Kim :)
Date: 7/14/2023 7:45:00 PM
Very innovative to use 1st POV for an Ekphrastic poem. Congratulations, Hat.
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:34:00 AM
Thanks suzette, I enjoyed this style
Date: 7/14/2023 7:42:00 PM
A marvellous Ekphrasis poem Hat, a good take on the Edvard Munch painting. Congratulations on your win in Dilly Dally’s contest… Belle
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Belle
Date: 7/14/2023 6:23:00 PM
"I ask myself which side I'm on And who is watching who" - A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:32:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/14/2023 2:17:00 PM
Hat, I love the back and forth between the observer and the observed. Congratulations on your placement in Dilly Dally’s contest!
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:25:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/16/2023 7:59:00 AM
This piece appeals to me on so many levels. Fantastic. xomo
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Date: 6/18/2023 9:13:00 AM
Thank you :)

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