Self Portrait As Part of a Grateful Universe

When I sleep, the atmospheric weight
pushes on my jaw, creaking
like overambition– I am pried open

Moonlight focused into silver cords
light the runway of my tongue

Spiders march through pearly gates,
little legs stepping over cracked molars

They nestle in the branches of my marrow
and tie taut webs around my heart

Silken string in twenty-four hands
push-pull     right-left     back-forth

My heart pumps grateful blood
and my jaw snaps shut with the dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 5:52 PM
You are super good with imagery!
Bryan Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Thank you Kim! I love imagery and sensory poems so that means a lot : )
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