Self Pity

Looking through my tainted window of gloom grey skies, rain falling, feeling sorrow impatiently wanting life to resume, will things change, get better tomorrow, sure that grass was greener the other side, not walking a mile in your well trod shoes now ashamed looking for somewhere to hide didn't realise how easily I would bruise, underestimate this feeling of loss an unidentifiable man anymore floundering like a wounded albatross, indecent intentions, now I deplore apologises are unheard, your not here didn't know how so much I loved you dear.

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Carole Duet

Date: 2/7/2017 8:53:00 PM

Lovely, yet sad. I can relate. Great poem!

Roy Pett
Date: 2/8/2017 3:36:00 AM

Thank you very much Carole for your kind comment and encouragement which I really appreciate, especially from an accomplished poet such as yourself, thanks again, Roy.

Roy Pett
Date: 2/8/2017 2:45:00 AM

Thank you very much Carole for your kind comment and encouragement which I really appreciate, especially from an accomplished poet such as yourself, thanks again, Roy.

Darren White

Date: 2/5/2017 5:15:00 AM

It's good to know this was not a personal loss. It so well describes the loss of color and will to live.

Roy Pett
Date: 2/5/2017 6:57:00 AM

Thank you very much Darren for reading and your very kind comment, like I replied to Daniel if I lost of my wife I would wallow in self pity, thanks for your support, Roy.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/30/2017 3:20:00 PM

Sad write, Roy. If it's personal. just think of it as her loss. You've probably culled better on the corner:)

Roy Pett
Date: 1/30/2017 3:35:00 PM

Thank you very much Daniel, no it's not about me but if I did lose my wonderful wife I would probably drown in self pity, Thanks again, Enjoying your writes, Roy.