Self-Love Proclaimed

I found my happy place in my dreams, 
Where life is not what it seems.

From birth to death, my story's told;
Both day and night the scenes unfold.

To relive it all and set it right,
My mind works overtime at night.

From the first, my mother loved me.
She said it often in my fantasy.

Each time I heard the words 'I love you',
My spirit soared, my confidence grew.

Eventually, this charade got old. 
My mother's heart remained stone cold.

So, I chose a new family, 
Whose love was as real as dreams can be.

I left home when I was grown
But the child inside was all alone.

My guardian angels took in this stray.
Their love and direction showed me the way.

And so, I continue to dream
Of a mother's love lost and unseen. 

But today I realized that I love me
So.... why couldn't she?

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Date: 3/10/2025 1:13:00 PM
Your wonderful winning poem was from a place of great strength and love despite dilemma and disappointment! I think your poem resonated with me as I too have felt let down by a parent. Thank you for sharing this and congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2025 5:06:00 PM
Karen, thank you for inspiring me with your contest. My disappointments as a child have helped me to become a better mother to my son. I know love is key to healthy development. A child growing without love is like a flower growing without sun. Both will seek what is needed.
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