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Self-Like Precision

Raven on my shoulder, emitting faint smolder, swirling, formed a vision with self-like precision.

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Date: 11/8/2023 1:18:00 AM
Your internal rhyming brings depth to what the raven was doing, A fine Alexandrine Las. Loved it
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/8/2023 6:39:00 AM
I fancied this one was a little eerie. Thanks my dear friend! :)
Date: 10/30/2023 2:15:00 PM
Creative work. I am wondering about this one lots of questions running through my head. Thanks for sharing this unique one. Sara K
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/30/2023 4:02:00 PM
Many thanks dear Sara. An interesting form. Try it! Thanks for stopping by and commenting! :)

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