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Self-Imposed Alienation

I’m lodged in this train on a top spot yet alone...while others trace a blue noon amiably, As dewed mist holds me immovable From my row ... the toot of a loud whistle makes me want to peep out restlessly. This journey is intermittent through my solos of night, where most wayfarers gig on-- animated, pleasant-- and they know where they're headed to, come eve, this clear level of certainty... a destination so sure relishing coffee, time's sagas with much fervor: Here I am, listening to their seemingly deified hums as the tenet of my life idly churns like rusted wheels, that a hazy eye gazes at an aching moon its glint wondering about my self- imposed deed of alienation. Palindromes Contest for Joseph May 5/20/2018

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Date: 5/28/2018 3:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your fine win.
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Date: 5/27/2018 4:33:00 PM
Nicely done, Nette, congratulations on your Palindromes win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/27/2018 11:29:00 AM
Well done, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/25/2018 9:10:00 AM
Oh, yes--alone in a crowd. Been there, done that! Well done, Nette. CONGRATS. Janice
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Date: 5/25/2018 7:48:00 AM
Many congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Nette :)
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Date: 5/24/2018 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this palindrome. Well done.
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Date: 5/24/2018 8:55:00 AM
Very nicely penned Nette..thanks for entering...Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/21/2018 6:27:00 AM
Nicely done nette...best of luck my friend...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/19/2018 5:29:00 PM
This is great, nette! My entry was more minor than yours and I wish you well!
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Date: 5/19/2018 4:40:00 PM
Well written nette..apt for the contest, a journey well depicted..best for a win.
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Date: 5/19/2018 3:29:00 PM
I can identify with the feelings you evoked in this lovely poem, if not the personalized facts.
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Date: 5/19/2018 3:25:00 PM
- Very well done, Nette ! - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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