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I have tons of dreams amid the night's agony. My optimism was tainted by despair. Is there a cure to reignite passion? Even anxiety found me sad. The walls of the soul were silent. The definition of wanting was inhibited. And now I find myself at the ending of the hallway. I am vigorously and repeatedly supervised. Have faith in healing, waiting for relief. We are puzzled by social visions. The sharp focus is like a cloud. The light on the Dark Ages. Appears and vanishes. Meaningless. Stress.

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Date: 4/5/2021 7:53:00 PM
Nice work, Lasaad. Yes, one can easily be overwhelmed by anxiety..., but, frankly, writing is a wonderful therapy. I wish I had a pill that would obliterate stress; I'd be enormously wealthy~!
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Date: 4/5/2021 8:01:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Milton. You have said it perfectly: writing is a stress-relieving treatment that works better than any pill. Believe me, Freind, if we quit writing, death is better.
Date: 4/5/2021 3:20:00 PM
quite often our stresses are meaningless and yet we don't seem to be able to put them aside so easily, nicely penned dear poet. thank you for sharing.
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Date: 4/5/2021 3:50:00 PM
I’m so glad you like it and appreciate you reading and commenting, If That’s ok to call you Rose, I wish you all the best all the time. // Lasaad

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