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Seguidillia--1

From a threadbare reverie Of nights disheveled An aching solitude grates Betrayal wrestled-- Howl endures love’s stain As rage bears cold quietude Words cannot explain. Seguidilla Contest of nette onclaud Sept 13, 2017 7- 5- 7- 5- 5- 7- 5

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Date: 9/23/2017 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win it is nicely done, Jajosh. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 6:58:00 AM
Excellent poetry, Jajosh, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 9/21/2017 7:25:00 PM
Amazing how you did your seguidillia. Congrats on a pedestal win.
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Date: 9/21/2017 5:51:00 PM
Very beautiful write Jajosh. Lovely lines and images. Congratulations on your high number one placement! :)
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write !
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Date: 9/21/2017 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations Jajosh :)
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Date: 9/21/2017 2:04:00 PM
Congrats, Jajosh!
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Date: 9/21/2017 1:24:00 PM
tearing me to bits as you expressed 'not a sound from the pavement' in an inimitable way...cheers J for a high slot and thanks for being part of this contest..huggs
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Date: 9/13/2017 1:31:00 PM
WOW! Well written, lovely poem, Jajosh--good luck for a win!
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