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Summer dims, the sun hangs low; Autumn's on her way. Leaves must fall and snow will fly: seasons have their say; warm, hot, cool, and cold. But soon, a new day will begin! Spring's rebirth, behold! September 13, 2017 Contest: Seguidilla Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Theme and line to include: Look...A new day has begun! 7- 5- 7- 5- 5- 7- 5 syllable count Line 2 rhymes with Line 4, and line 5 rhymes with line 7

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Date: 9/23/2017 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :) , Sandra Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your placement.
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Date: 9/21/2017 7:41:00 PM
Your poem is absolutely gorgeous, Sandra. Congrats. I really liked your entry.
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:28:00 PM
this sensitive, heartfelt write brightened my day, sandra... i wanted to place this higher though we used most words from a phrase given... best congrats on your win and thanks for entering... do come by again for my next spree... huggs
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:16:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in the contest with this pretty write, I love it !
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Date: 9/14/2017 4:18:00 PM
I'm seeing awesome interpretations of this topic and your poem is one I tuned to--sunny, inspirational. Did the sponsor request that we avoid using phrases from the lines? We better check; i'll go back to the contest page. Just a thought. Warmest!
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Date: 9/14/2017 8:39:00 AM
Great imagery, Sandra:)
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