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Old sepia photographs of our wedding day. Fifty happy years have passed, now my hair’s turned grey! You still hold my hand telling me I’m so pretty true love is so grand! Checked with how many syllables Sequidilla Contest Chosen line 2. I can smile at the old days ; I was beautiful then. Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 09-14-17

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2017 9:54:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :) , Jan Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2017 7:48:00 AM

Many thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/22/2017 12:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2017 3:20:00 AM

Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2017 7:36:00 PM

Congrats on your sweet win with your extra sweet seguidilla.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2017 3:21:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) We were both on the list:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2017 4:45:00 PM

Congrats Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2017 3:22:00 AM

thanks Vijay:-)I was happy to be on the winner's list:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 9/21/2017 3:10:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in the contest, I love your poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2017 3:22:00 AM

thanks Constancet:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2017 2:28:00 PM

jan!...this brims of love and sweet images...big cheers on your laurels and thanks for being around to share this gem...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2017 3:23:00 AM

thanks Nette :-) I was so delighted to be on the winner's list:-) hugs jan xx

Gary Smith

Date: 9/21/2017 2:26:00 PM

Congrats Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2017 3:24:00 AM

thanks Gary :-) :-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/21/2017 1:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan! We tied!

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/22/2017 4:42:00 PM

Now, Jan, that just sounds perverted!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2017 3:24:00 AM

thanks Dale :-) But were you on top of me or vice versa ... it IS important you know lol lol loll :-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/14/2017 11:15:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Jan ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 1:44:00 AM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/14/2017 10:27:00 PM

You're very photogenic with that bouquet of flowers, Jan...don't know about your hubby though lol...great write my friend...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 1:45:00 AM

lol ^WW^ I hate my picture being taken lol:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/14/2017 8:53:00 PM

So beautiful! GL in contest, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 1:45:00 AM

thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/14/2017 8:33:00 PM

Your poem is so charming and lovely Jan! Wonderful content and rhyme. Good luck in the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 1:45:00 AM

thanks Susan:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2017 8:12:00 PM

This is FANTASTIC, and yes, Jan. WE did totally opposite view points!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 1:47:00 AM

I LOVE to see the different takes on the same theme:-) thanks for your continued support and friendship my 'poetic goddess' friend lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 9/14/2017 6:01:00 PM

Beautiful romance comes alive in this Jan. Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 6:06:00 PM

Thanks Jean i do appreciate you dropping by to comment:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/14/2017 5:47:00 PM

What a sweet poem. Yes, true love accepts the grey hair and wrinkles and all.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 5:53:00 PM

I see old couples who are still so in love Agnes my aunt and uncle celebrated their 60th wedding anniversary last year, sadly now my uncle has dementia but you will never see a more devoted couple:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/14/2017 4:24:00 PM

Very sweet Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 4:30:00 PM

Thanks Tim the contest is filling so fast i had to get this written tonight and posted. I don't usually post 2 poems in a day as the other poem will get little attention now but I doubt I will be active tomorrow as i have yet another funeral to attend and will be busy until later afternoon :-( hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/14/2017 4:20:00 PM

at some point, if not just a brief second we were all beautiful...good luck...what happened to your contest?

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 4:26:00 PM

Thanks Frederic:-) Regarding the contest I have been away on holiday and have got a lot of catching up to do - yet another funeral tomorrow so I will hopefully have time at the weekend:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2017 2:29:00 PM

Lovely!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 4:31:00 PM

Thanks Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2017 1:25:00 PM

You did very, very, awesome Jan! This has a chance to be #1, it is in my book! I love the way you are kind hearted and loving with your poetry! I surely enjoyed reading this incredible poem this afternoon! What a dynamic piece of poetry! Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 4:31:00 PM

aww thank you for your lovely comment Russell i hope you are now pain free and stating to heal:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2017 1:07:00 PM

- Beautiful with romance and love, Jan - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2017 4:32:00 PM

I rarely do romantic writes so thought i would give it a go for this contest:-) hugs jan xx