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I walked the lonely dark streets, I had not a friend. HE had pushed them all a w a y I ran in the end- It was midnight, how I prowled like a lost stray cat but I smiled - MEOW ___________________ September 14, 2017 Verse/Seguildda - 1 Copyright Protected, ID 939766 Written for the contest, Seguidilla sponsor, Nette Onclaud Fifth Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2017 9:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win :) , Broken Wings. Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/22/2017 12:15:00 AM

Congratulation on your placement, Constance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2017 7:37:00 PM

oh that ending is so unexpected and cute, Constance. Love it! Congrats in this contest. It was a fun one.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/21/2017 5:48:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, loved the last two lines! Congratulations on your wonderful win Broken Wings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2017 4:46:00 PM

Congrats BW!

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/21/2017 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations Constance for your win in nette's contest

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/21/2017 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations Broken Wings :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2017 2:52:00 PM

constance, great element of surprise which knoched me off my feet...a meowy congrats on your award and thanks for joining...huggs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/17/2017 2:06:00 PM

Lovely, appealing poem, Constance! Janice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/17/2017 9:24:00 AM

This was cute, Constance:) should do well:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/15/2017 9:18:00 AM

Wow! Nicely done! A surprise ending!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/15/2017 6:28:00 AM

Lovely depiction of the silence at midnight--the last line, a fun ending--good luck for a win, BW!

Sneha Rv

Date: 9/15/2017 6:21:00 AM

This is so cute! I love how the last line changes the whole theme - Hope this does very well in the contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2017 1:16:00 AM

I love the cute ending Constance! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/14/2017 10:46:00 PM

The last line gave me a chuckle! Very clever x

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2017 10:22:00 PM

Cleverly written my friend! I really enjoyed this incredible poem here this evening Constance! You have written such an astounding piece, one at which beats my lowly poem in comparison! I like being able to compare our two as we both did the first line...and you have written the better of us two! Great Work!!