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Seguidilla - 1

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The night has arrived quite dark The rain has just passed Midnight has struck, a puddle Spreads on pavement dressed By the light beyond Harken the lamp does express Water on the ground
Seguidilla Contest, used line #1 Written with slant rhymes (hope that is acceptable) 14 September 2017

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Eve Roper
Date: 9/23/2017 9:59:00 PM
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Back to congratulate you on your win :) , Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/22/2017 12:19:00 AM
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Congratulations on your placement, Russell.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/21/2017 7:40:00 PM
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Nicely done, nicely won, my friend. Congrats to you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 4:47:00 PM
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Congrats Russell!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/21/2017 3:19:00 PM
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enjoyed the poetic depth and tonality of this verse, my friend russell... i accept pure and end rhymes, yet you managed to create assonance through your splendid work!...fine congrats on your win and thanks for participating!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/21/2017 3:18:00 PM
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enjoyed the poetic depth and tonality of this verse, my friend russell... i accept pure and end rhymes, yet you managed to create assonance through your splendid work!...fine congrats on your win and thanks for participating!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2017 3:15:00 PM
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Russell, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful verse !
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Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2017 9:42:00 PM
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Russell , great poem for the contest, Gl
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/15/2017 9:34:00 PM
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I enjoyed this, dark, how I like it! The photo is amazing too!
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Silent One
Date: 9/15/2017 8:58:00 AM
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Great take on the contest Russell..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 6:33:00 AM
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The night, the rain, the puddle paint the pavement well and the lamp shine as well, Russell! Best wishes for a win!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/14/2017 11:20:00 PM
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Imagery is wonderful, Russell you picked the same verse I did... Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Thvia Shetley
Date: 9/14/2017 9:58:00 PM
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Nice wording and imagery! Best of luck in the contest!
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