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Seguidilla-3

Lovely ecstatic new day Slowly came upon Sun's luminous radiance Having heard at dawn Dark night's awful scream As new moon's obscurity Shattered lovely dream. Placed 6th September 14, 2017 Seguidilla-3 Sponsor: nette onclaud Verified on howmanysyllables.com

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2022 5:37:00 AM

The contrast frightening and all too real especially in today’s world. New day, slow realization…a scream in the night then shattered dreams. On news today a lone college student in a good area, while working, gets stabbed and killed.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2017 9:58:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :) , Vijay Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2017 7:15:00 AM

Thanks Eve!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/22/2017 12:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/22/2017 6:09:00 AM

Thank you Subimal!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/21/2017 5:46:00 PM

Wow awesome imagery and rhyme Vijay! Congratulations on your wonderful win :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Susan!

Constance La France

Date: 9/21/2017 3:14:00 PM

Vijay, congratulations on your win!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 4:52:00 PM

Thanks BW!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2017 3:07:00 PM

vijay, incredible sentiments which make this seguidilla worthy of a win...finest congrats and thanks for supporting my contest...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 4:52:00 PM

Thanks nette!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/21/2017 3:03:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Heidi--congrats on your top spot win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2017 6:13:00 PM

Oh I love seeing these little poems for her contest. WELL DONE, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/17/2017 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/14/2017 11:22:00 PM

love the imagery you have created in your verse, nicely done, Vijay, luck in the contest... ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Eve!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2017 8:26:00 PM

This is very unique and uses some great imagery, Vijay. Good luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2017 6:11:00 AM

Thank you Andrea!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/14/2017 5:08:00 PM

Beautifully worded poem, Vijay. My compliments!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 7:47:00 PM

Thank you Ralph!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/14/2017 4:05:00 PM

Moving, descriptive contrast, Vijay. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Janice!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2017 1:31:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest ... hope this will win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 2:23:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise for your lovely comments!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2017 1:09:00 PM

This is a finely tuned write, so beautifully displayed and wondrously written! I surely enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 2:22:00 PM

Thank you Russell for your lovely feedback!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/14/2017 9:29:00 AM

An awe inspiring poem matching the glory of dawn my friend, Vijay! Good luck my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 12:47:00 PM

Honored by your visit Demetrios--many thanks for your lovely comments!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/14/2017 8:36:00 AM

Very nice my friend...a winner for sure Vijay...best of luck anyway...god bless...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 12:45:00 PM

Thank you WW for your lovely comments!