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Seen Through a Half Glass

Dinner was over an hour ago Counters wiped clean, dishes are washed and dried I hold my glass up to the light like a color slide, and see the world, warped, and blurred through the half glass of rosy wine It makes everything seem clearer somehow, and sobers the mind Forming long, umber silhouettes, we sit on the lawn, and gaze to the mountains, talking quietly, and sipping the pink chardonnay Dark of the shade seems to drink up the light of day Evening carols being sung by two mourning doves, are accompanied by a choir of crickets in the dewy grass calling for reverence, in honor of a dying sun Soft voices are lifted in still air The pink light seems to paralyze time. We have found kindness here, and somehow the grueling trials of the year seem smaller than they did yesterday Now the day turns toward the darkness and we have rid our taste of the dry and bitter dust of everything that has been said and done The north wind shakes the trees and the last leaf that clung so fast and tight releases its grip, and disappears into the dusk We shall never need to see where it lands for we are forbidden strangers to the dark Let us remain friends with the light Let us unclench our old resistance And after we have finished the last drop of wine we will turn, and go inside and thank our stars for the pungent taste that yet lingers on our tongues in case we might need proof that some years will harvest a bitter taste.... and some years will harvest a crop blessed by the sun _____________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/26/2016 8:42:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your Giving Thanks, WIN.... LINDA ...
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Date: 1/13/2016 6:19:00 PM
cARRIE Congratulations on your 2015 win. Hus ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:09:00 PM
Carrie, Nice to see you on Debbie Guzzi, winning list...... Congratulations! Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/18/2013 2:39:00 PM
I really liked the affects brought about by the page & line layout! You are so prolific, I never know it's you! Congrad's on your fine work taking a top spot! Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2013 8:30:00 AM
just gorgeous! my favorite image is the "choir of crickets," but there are so many wonderful images in this lovely piece.
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Date: 7/18/2013 8:05:00 AM
Well Carrie, I just don't know what to say anymore...I have run out of words describing your poetry...Can't pick out a favorite line or phrase, nothin!...What am I gonna do? I noticed you mentioned (without mentioning it) the recent tragedy in your life and it is apparent that it has made you an even better poet than you were before...Some of your recent poems have a slight tinge of sadness about them combined with greater wisdom and deeper insight...Congrats of course - Tim
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:55:00 PM
an explosion of both warm and chilled images on kinship... another gem that deserves laurels... congrats, carie!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2013 1:41:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work...Sara
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Date: 7/16/2013 8:04:00 PM
Wow, it's stunning poetry, Carrie, the way it meanders down in a procession of delectable images, big congrats !!!
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Date: 7/16/2013 5:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win for your 2nd placement. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/2/2013 11:06:00 PM
Hello Carrie..' I am happy to have had a glimpse of your afternoon/evening and a taste of the season...and those gone by; in this rich piece of work from your discriptive pen..!
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Date: 6/30/2013 6:42:00 AM
Seems you leaned into a Half Glass "full" perspective. I love the fragile balance maintained here. :)
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Date: 6/29/2013 7:11:00 AM
Hi there Carrie..always morphing! Please change form to Free Verse BIG HUGS..great work! L & L
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:52:00 PM
I really like this. I love the way you craft your words. Excellent job.
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:23:00 PM
Oh gee..lovely, lovely. As usual.. BG
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