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Seeking Nature's Serenity

Seeking Nature's Serenity
   (An Irish Sonnet)


Over the lush meadows graceful birds fly 
Songs echoing on back from forested trees 
Bright colors flashing from the bluest sky 
Like flying fish skimming the dancing seas 
Flowers gift fragrance to the busy bees  
Each petal shining out enticing glow  
Magnificent beauty taken with ease  
Smiling skies looking far down below 
Just look, Nature tells all we need to know 
Inside our hearts rest this dearest sweet hope 
Beauty graces everything- Nature's show 
Such rare sights as a racing antelope 

Seek Nature's serenity just to cope
Living under this solar telescope

Robert J. Lindley, 11-18-2015

Idea came from Peter Duggan's - Irish sonnet titled- "Sweet Nature"  -....
an Irish Sonnet.
Obviously influenced by the English sonnet there is also still a Celtic
 influence in making a link from stanza to stanza.. It still follows the three quaterns 
and a couplet pattern, but each stanza is linked to the next giving a rhyme pattern of; 
a. b. a. b. . b. c. b. c. . c. d. c. d. .d.d.
 


Poem Syllable Counter Results

Syllables Per Line:	10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
Total # Syllables:	140
Total # Lines:	15  (Including empty lines)
Words with (syllables) counted programmatically:	 N/A
Total # Words:	92

Thanks Peter, this one gave me so much pleasure in creating...

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Date: 11/18/2015 10:57:00 PM
I am terrible at math! But wow I loved the poem Robert! Loved these 2 lines, "Smiling skies looking far down below Just look, Nature tells all we need to know "
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