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Seeking Dreams

Leaving ease of home, I trek Past rough lanes… Feet bruised Though nights rip, my grit to seek dreams prevail Almost drained bus honks like fate’s call Morn breaks granting luck— From heaven! 5/14/2019 Charlie New Form Contest Sponsor: charles messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/26/2019 10:17:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/26/2019 12:22:00 PM

Hello Nette, Nette our dreams can take us anywhere. Have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina

Date: 5/25/2019 8:51:00 PM

After reading this a second time I understand it more. Great write, Nette. Congratulations on your win. Hugs//Charlie :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2019 1:29:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great suggestions, Nette ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/16/2019 12:56:00 PM

A wonderful and very different form of poetry which fascinated me - leaving the ease of home is never easy - so well penned Nette! Hugs, Jenn.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/15/2019 5:24:00 AM

Never easy making your way out there when you are young or old,. You say much in these little lines Nette. Hope your day is as gentle and calming as you are to me, xo