Seeking Answers (For Jared's Contest)

Wasted days
Wandering through life’s maze
Trying to sort the truth from the lies

I call out, but it seems nobody hears my cries
With each futile attempt, something inside me dies
Skies overhead are filled with thunder

What was my worst blunder?
I wonder

To heaven I gaze
Lord, help me find contentment
In hope my hands raise
Yes, I know I was once blessed
Raised well by loving parents

Is there no cure for this malaise?
How did these sad feelings arise?
I listen but hear no replies
My question I seek to rephrase

As much sorrow on my heart weighs 
Searching for words that will not rise
Is there no cure for this malaise?
How did these sad feelings arise?

Forgive me, Lord, I’ll change my ways
I’m humbled; I will compromise
Contrition you’ll find in my eyes
Must I be sad throughout my days?
Is there no cure for this malaise?


*Combination of Trois Par Huit, Tanka and Rondel for Jared’s contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 12:14 PM
An insightful write with self searching.Wonderful poem...
Mannan Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Just beautiful. many congratulations dear friend.
La France Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Congratualations, Carolyn on first place with this amazing poem, just beautiful.. love
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Carolyn in Jared Pickett's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 1:30 PM
Carolyn...a big vow on notching first spot in contest. Gud poetic introspection using well all three forms Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra Mehta
Guzzi Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Heart felt write proud to share the #1 with you! Very proud! Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations Carolyn, aren't we on a roll! Congratulations on a well deserve first place. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations for a super win for super poem. Love, Joyce
Tideswell Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your super win Carolyn :)
Richards Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:22 AM
An excellent win, dear Carolyn. This speaks from the heart!! Congratulations!
Pickett Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 4:09 AM
Hey Carolyn, Congrats on taking a shared #1 spot with Deborah Guzzi... I could not choose only one poem this time, if I could I would have like six..... Excellent poem my friend another example as to why I dig your style.... Keep pumpin these fine works out and you will continue to find yourself in the winners circle month in and month out..... EXCELLENT.....:JP]
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:21 AM
excellent words once again
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:07 AM
My dear Carolyn, this is sooo very good! All will be well one day and you are not alone. A definite favorite. I wish you good luck in Jared's Contest with this perfect entry! Much love, Audrey
Anderson Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Thnx Carolyn, always for your kind and encouraging comment left for me...Pls know that it means a whole lot to me...hugs, Jimmy
Tideswell Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Excellent Carolyn, your three forms fit together seamlessly. Best wishes in the contest ~ Sharon :)
Freeman Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 7:20 AM
'Awesome Job" agape, Moses
Knop Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Great combination here, Carolyn! Enjoyed the read today afternoon! And best of luch in Jared's contest! Thank you for your comment on Babij Yar. I read Jewtushenko's poem years ago and remebered it what gave me the idea to write a poem too on Babij Yar. Yes, you are right, for us it will remain unbelievable what German SS-troops did!..Have a great Sunday!. Love, Gert
Bloomsfield Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 5:29 AM
A friend like you whose always there for others should definitely be rewarded and im sure God will answer you,just listen. .there is the sun somewhere over the rainbow,so you just gotta feel it shining. .tmfvs,and i miss you and my p.s friends too.Cuchi!
Locksley Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 5:02 PM
Gee, I don't know how you did it combining all those forms, but your poem is very sad and meaningful. Hope you don't really feel this way!
Keys Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Carolyn, i seem to be drawn back to this poem again and again. i think we both share some thoughts of life, fate and ultimately God. You are a very deep tender person, you respond to everything you see, feel or sense. Your writing clearly demonstrates these. Maybe our spirits are aligned? thank you, again, chuck
Keys Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 2:14 PM
what a wonderful piece. such words, spoken so well. thank you, chuck
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Carolyn this a work of art. beautiful.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:09 PM
well done my friend! I am not even going to try this one...though you have made it look easy!
Neels Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Carolyn I loved how you ended this one.. We sometimes go through life with so many questions in our search we pass the gems and notable wonders.. Best wishes with this beautiful and introspective write my friend, love Wilma
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