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Inspired by Olive Eloisa Guillermo's poetry contest: "I am Not Ashamed of The Gospel"

Seek Ye First: Flashlight In the Dark

Once upon a time, I believed that earthly men held felicity keys
Myriad of joy one special someone would woo me to rely on
But soft whispers serendipitous of grace, I heard with ease
Steep in thought, I surely had reached zenith of my reflections.

At times I lived and breathe guilt. Passage of my life held stripes
Alone before inner mirror, my muse hushed, as I turned within
Sensing some celestial being so near, it cast light on daylight
I saw that putting earthly man before my Creator was a sin.

All I'd ever known: dread, toil, woe, they all turned symphony
Tranquility saturated my soul as I reached for my telephone
Hugged my new found thought; epitome of gift above any
Then in dulcet tone, I asked for the nearest SDA church to my home.

Enraptured Sabbath was a day away, I breathe that spring, anew
For "Seek Ye First..." resonated, and "No Man Cometh..." coalesce
I would take Him at His promises; but Jesus, to me, was Catalyst overdue
Tears cascaded sans shame; blessings began to flow as though a test.

I called down South to family, and shared epiphany I've had
I would yield, volunteer, give thanks and life praises to my God
I shredded fear and found fresh spark that made me glad
My life became a constant advent season, as I look up to God.

"Seek ye first the kingdom of God, and his righteousness; and all these things shall be added unto you." (Matthew 6:33)

"No man cometh unto the Father, but by me." (John 14:6)

(Entry for Olive Eloisa Guillermo's 14-20 lines poetry contest: 'I am Not Ashamed of The Gospel)
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A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Iris, thank you for the reply to my comment. LINDA
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Quite welcome dear one. Have a lovely day.
Poteet Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:46 AM
Not only congratulations on your win, but congratulations on a beautiful statement of your faith in God. He is indeed the only god worthy of our praise and confidence. He will not fail; He cannot fail. Love the title.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thank you dear one. Agree and amen.
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:26 AM
Iris, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Did I now. Thanks for visiting.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Iris.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma. My Great Aunt once said, "When you do poetry, make sure God is in it."
Cwiak Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:30 AM
A thoughtful and stellar write, Iris. Your words are an inspiration for all. Wonderful and creative based in the faith they exclaim. Congrats on your win.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Thank you Dan, for kind and warm words inspiring. May your day be filled with pleasantries.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Iris, Congrats on your awesome win. --SKAT--
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Thank you dear, but it doesn't fit right form i was told. Peace and love
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:33 PM
What a wonderful testimony Iris, congratulations on your win. Best wishes from Jean
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Thank you my dear, yet i was told it's not the right form.
Onclaud Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 12:10 PM
to be persistent and loyal is sweet grace!..congrats iris and huggs
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Nette, I so thank you; but I was informed that was wrong form. Peace and blessings.
Selfa Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Iris! :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thanks dear, for stopping by with your warmth; but I was told it was the wrong form. Peace and blessings.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 4:06 AM
Iris, I so love this work, I want it higher but.. i'll explain to you in soupmail.... but I so love this poem.. =`) especially the last stanza.. =`) CONGRATULATIONS!!! ~oLIVE eLOISA =`)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Thank you for constructive criticism that's like eye opener. Peace and blessings.
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations!
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Thank you, Susan, but I was told it's not the right form. Blessings to you.
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