Seeing the Light
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9/28/2024 for Rhymes in Nine 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May
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I lost my spark on a night so dark.
The sun did descend, a stark day did end,
with a ringing, stinging remark.
Now I see what a lamplight shows me.
Frosty, for free, did lend a perch, made a friend,
waking me and making me see.
A cardinal from high, and a round, snowy guy,
I sigh, they charm, an arm and heart they extend,
stars aligning, shining in the sky and my eye.
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2024
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