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Seeing Red

a trilonnet My naïveté inspires this rhyme. You lied to me, I turned my head, you stole my keys, the day we met. No accident, you made the climb - two flights of stairs with breakneck tread for red Corvette in greed you sweat. You took my wheels, committed crime because you love the color red? I love my car but greater yet I love the fact you're doing time while I embrace my keys instead. This time in jail you will regret and if you steal my car again you'll lie in state till who knows when. Reason A Poteet historical

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Date: 2/25/2014 9:54:00 PM
Great poem. Congratulations on your win. Love,joyce
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Date: 2/25/2014 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem - Connie
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:47:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,reason
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:17:00 AM
Reason, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2014 2:58:00 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, R.A.P. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2014 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lisa, nice way to leave a comment as a historical record. Appreciate the read.

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